Revised!Does this sound like a promising plot and are these promising characters?

I absolutely love your characters names. They aren't totally out there but not overly common either. I know you said the crew was young because the youngest age to Lunar Covenant was 18 but such a young crew it seems unlikely they would be at there level of expertise at there ages. If that makes sense. Why not make them a bit older like 23-29 or something. But I guess if you like the ages keep them they are alright. I like the name of the ship Clockwork. It's a very interesting plot and the characters are pretty good! Keep Writing! - Cass